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A visit to the zoo

It’s Sunday morning; my friends, Rose, Peter and I were at zoo. We went there by bus and Rose bought the tickets near the gate. After that we came in the zoo.

 

First we go to the ‘elephant garden’. An elephant was taking a bath. Then we left the ‘elephant garden’ and walked to the ‘tiger town’. Two tigers are sleeping. The tigers are beautiful.

 

Next we went to the ‘Monkey garden’. Two monkeys were swinging. ‘So naughty monkeys!’ Rose shouted.

 

We left there and we were so thirsty. We went to a store and bought an ice-creams and two bottles of juice.

 

After that, we went home by bus. It is really a happy day!

 

My favorit season

Spring is a good season, many people like it. Spring is the first season in a year, a start of a year.

When Spring comes, the flowers bloom, the birds sing, the snow melts, the weather gets warm and the days gets longer.

We can fly kites in Spring. Children like flying kites very much. If the weather becomes warm, we can wear shorts and T-shirt.

When Spring comes, a new term comes too. We can go to school and play with our classmates. We will be happy.

Welcome, spring, we love you, you are beautiful.

I also like summer because it is always sunny. There are not mosquitoes in this season. The summer is very hot but I can sleep in a air-conditioned room.

In the park

This is a sunny Sunday in summer, Jones’ family are having a good time in the park. They are under a big tree. Two birds are singing in the tree. Mr Jones and Mrs Jones are sitting in a big chair. Mr Jones is reading newspaper carefully. Mrs Jones is listening to the radio. Sally and Patty are reading books. Patty is lying on the ground and Sally is sitting on the ground. They like reading books very much. Tommy is a good boy. Now he is playing the guitar, he is a good guitar player.

They are enjoying the life. This is a good day for Jones family.

Dear Sue,

Hello, I am Liuyun, London must be fun. I live in China. China is good country. I live in Huizhou City in South of China. Huizhou City is a beautiful city. There is a famous lake-West lake and there is a famous river-Dongjiang river in Huizhou. I often go to see them with my parents.

I like playing the piano and I like swimming and skating. My mother and my fathers are engineers. They go to work together every day and they are very busy every day.

 

Sue I hope you will come to China for a travelling.

Yours

Liu Yun

 

Lisa’s bedroom

Lisa is a woman who is an engineer and she has a beautiful bedroom

Open the door, you can see a desk and there is a flower on the desk. Over the desk is a mirror. There is a cabinet in the wall. There are many beautiful clothes in it.

In front of the cabinet, there is a bed. A colourful sheet is on the bed. Near the bed is an end table. There is a yellow clock on the table.

In front of the end table, there is another desk. There are many book and many pens on the desk. Lisa often works on the desk.

This is Lisa’s beautiful bedroom.

Our birthdays

Hello! Everyone, my name is Doudou. I am eleven years old. I like autumn best because my birthday is in autumn. When is your birthday? My birthday is on twenty-third of October.

Do you like your birthday? I like my birthday very much. On my birthday, I can sing, dance, and play….do many things. I can get presents from my parents and my friends. I am very happy on my birthday.

I like my best friend’s birthday too. My best friend is qingqing. She is also my classmate. She is ten years old, too. We played together on her birthday. First we ate a big birthday cake. Second, we sang many songs and we played the same piano at same time. Third, we played computer game together.

 

I like my birthday very much. We should thank our parents for the birthday. Do you know your parents’ birthdays?

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